Miscellaneous:

[Ha Hoang]

George W. Molting the Devil

Pen is a weapon
As weapons
Just hand the pen
To kill the entire population


And bloody war
Pen only makes
On the threshold of war picture
And terrorist attacks

America's bad pen
Back genocide IRAQ
Destructive culture
Never regeneration

Pen is the devil
Team live on human blood
Killing an entire nation
And kill their own people

When it of no ink pen
Social acclaim
Monsters Killed many people
Never regeneration

Even when Brake authentication
Even when mincemeat
Did not pay off debt
Molting the Devil

[MsJacquiiC]

Hi again Ha - I've moved this poem from Emotional Romantic to Miscellaneous...
Well - this is one of those political pieces I don't quite agree with. So I will not comment on the politics - I will say that though the purpose of your write comes through (you hate George W. Bush) it's not written very well, or it's not translated to English very well. I'm not sure I understand what or who "Pen" is... Care to explain?

Again - please familiarize yourself with the JPiC Posting Policy before posting any more of your work. In fact - when you logon next, feel free to browse some of your fellow board members' writing and share the poetic love by commenting others work

Jacquii.

[zaac]

Pen=the world observations and emotions told through the quill and ink of a poet. i am thinking its a translation problem. if it was written in a foreign tongue, and translated electronically, it probably goes by high dollar best guess on the words protocols. If it was written in Chinese, it is seriously difficult to translate due to the number of characters in chinese language and the preciseness of them with respect to the sloppiness of the English language.

zz jus sayin

[MsJacquiiC]

IDK- but the OP didn't bother to come back and explain - so I'm counting this thread as one of those "I just don't give a damn anymore" type things