Ghost in my bedroom (first post)

Mr Benn · 12-09-2006, 04:24 AM

There’s a Ghost in my Bedroom
That no one can see
He makes such a mess
Then mum blames me.

There’s a Ghost in the Bathroom
He drops clothes on the floor
Leaves the top off the toothpaste
And fingermarks on the door.

There’s a Ghost in our kitchen
And he’s greedy I think
All the cookies are eaten
And there’s crumbs in the sink.

There’s a Ghost in my Classroom
And he’s been there too long
For he changes my schoolwork
And makes it all wrong

There are Ghosts all around me
They must rise up from their Graves
For I never cause trouble
And I always behave

But at night when I’m sleeping
Or just lying in Bed
They are nowhere to be found
Cos they’re back in my Head!

Altree94 · 12-10-2006, 03:35 AM

LOL! Excellent write, Mr.Benn! Hate to tell you this but I think your ghosts have come to MY house! LOL! Looking forward to reading more of your stuff!

sage · 12-11-2006, 02:20 PM

great piece, good rhyme and flow that tells a poignant story, well done!

v3sista · 12-11-2006, 02:32 PM

Mr Benn-

I gotta tell ya I think these very Ghosts R following my daughter around. She has some of these same issues, but of course she's clueless. Lol!!!

Nice job, w/ your first.

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jasmine321123 · 12-14-2006, 07:24 PM

that was really good.....there was a funny side to it when i first went to read it i thought it may be a bit dark(ghosts ect) but by the end i was giggling inside...very good write

nomadicrhymer · 12-21-2006, 02:39 PM

This was VERY CUTE! I loved it! Thanks.