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Old 04-10-2008, 11:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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In the
graveyard
darkness embraces me
I am
not
afraid
My love
is
w/ me again
I did not
have the courage
to join her
But
I could not
live w/out her either
She is
cold
so very cold
But I
will make
her warm again
My love
I have
missed you
How good
it feels
to lie w/ you again
Now I can
Finally sleep
w/ you in my arms again
Awake suddenly
my head is in a fog
fuzzy and disoriented
It was
all just a dream
or an illusion
Though
it felt
so real
The coldness
of her
skin
The earth
her
coffin
"It felt so real"
I whisper
w/ a sigh
I pull
the covers
closer about me and roll over
Her side
of the bed
empty and cold for so long
Now
caked w/ dirt
and no longer empty
A pale
desiccated form
now lay beside me
It was
no dream after all
my love is w/ me again.
 

Old 04-12-2008, 06:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Default Re: Grave Thoughts
Marvalous penning Eric The haunted feeling as your thoughts of a loved one long time passed drift into and out of your dreams and thoughts I love this penning as I do believe in ghosts, spirits, and the afterlife
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bear
 

Old 04-12-2008, 06:25 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Dear Eric,

My perferred genre for writing stories is horror, soft horror, the enchanted, macabre, etc. This is my favorite also...going into my favorites and I tell ya...you are prolific in writing excellent poetry. Just ...I think I have learned some things from you already! Sheesh! I do not want to change anything you don't want to, however, as mentioned in the Chatbox, I may suggest writing out the "w/." Also, if I may suggest, separating the stanzas to complete an thought and start another. Damn, I love this poem! Can I have it? lolol...much love to ya!

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