04-12-2008, 06:25 PM
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Re: Grave Thoughts
Dear Eric,
My perferred genre for writing stories is horror, soft horror, the enchanted, macabre, etc. This is my favorite also...going into my favorites and I tell ya...you are prolific in writing excellent poetry. Just  ...I think I have learned some things from you already! Sheesh! I do not want to change anything you don't want to, however, as mentioned in the Chatbox, I may suggest writing out the "w/." Also, if I may suggest, separating the stanzas to complete an thought and start another. Damn, I love this poem! Can I have it? lolol...much love to ya!
Painted
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