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Old 04-14-2008, 04:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The house
lies
abandoned

Boards over
the windows
the yard choked with weeds

But it is
far
from empty

For inside it
lives
a presence

Felt by all
who
pass near

A voice
calls

Beckons

Wails
desperate
to be heard

A spirit
smashes spectral fists
against boarded windows

My love my love
a whisper moving through the stagnant air

Where is my love.
 

Old 04-14-2008, 06:03 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Dear Eric,

Now you are in my territory ! First I love the title, then the eerie build up, which gives the audience images so crisp and an ending that mixes the macabre with tenderness. I want this and please dedicate it to me....lol LOVE this Eric. Excellent rating and going into my favorites!

Dr. Rob


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