Miscellaneous:

[LW Barker]

I wake up in the still of night,
to see not one, but two hellish eyes
staring at me from the foot of my bed.

I sit frozen in terror, as they move closer to me
I cry out - "Please God no!"
But how can this be?

I scream and jump up out of my sleep
"'Tis only a nightmare dear" -
says a voice from the foot of my bed;
From not one, but two hellish eyes.

[MsJacquiiC]

Hey LW - This poem is quite eerie - Has a Stephen King feel to it... I'd love to know your inspiration/motivation from whence came these words!

Very interesting piece - Thanx for sharing it!

Jacquii.

[LW Barker]

Hi there

From whence came these words? Well they are the result of a nightmare I had after which they were written Stephen King is one of my favorite writers so I am well pleased by your comparison. Thank you.

LW

[PaintedDiary]

LOVE IT!!!!!!!! I would love to see you write a short story on this subject. I liked the surprise ending. I better sleep on the counch tonight!! LOL!! Keep doing your thang!!

[eatmypen]

Great poem. I enjoyed it a lot too. It's a strange scenario, but you lace with such subtle humor that I found myself grinning like a jackass at the end.