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Old 07-12-2007, 07:47 AM   #1 (permalink)
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It rested there, still upon the air,
but not as if upon stilts which defied
the weight of it's all too significant share.
And our eyes were fixed, forever there,
much as a pin on a map of a mountaintop
with this unearthly thing holding them there.
This curious assembly, we viewed from afar,
which appeared to dismount as if to depart the air
'tween we and the stars,
for the ground where we are,
standing transfixed by this ushering star,
and hoping to see one move,
then do, but deny it's portent.
But now we know,
for here they are.
"There is no expedient to which a man will not go to avoid the labor of thinking" Thomas A. Edison
 

Old 07-13-2007, 05:28 AM   #2 (permalink)
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But now we know,
for here they are.
The Last two lines go great with your poem. ^^

Hehe, It's such a cool poem and i love yyour use of the word stars. I dunno why I just... Do.

 

Old 08-17-2007, 08:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you, Aste. This image graced me in a dream several years ago. It left me feeling as if I would one day witness it in reality. Chilling, in a way, but a welcome vibe nonetheless,
 

Old 08-20-2007, 06:53 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Lovely poem! Even better as a dream, I think

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Old 10-06-2007, 10:36 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Even in the dream I had a strong feeling that I would someday witness something like this in reality. Much like the kid in the new War of the Worlds film, who just had to see it for himself.
 


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