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Old 04-12-2008, 11:16 AM   #1 (permalink)
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She walks with her head held low,
No one need see her overflowing eyelids and blackened eyes.
She hasn't brushed her hair for days.
She wears long sleeves for a reason.
Crossing roads without looking,
Because the consequences don't seem to matter anymore.
"I've seen lovers dancing in windows."
-Craigary Michael Owens.
 

Old 04-12-2008, 07:39 PM   #2 (permalink)
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just ....Very right here. here it is...so sad the concept, the poem, the images, the life that some are living just like this. There is so much I want to say and I will be back, and that title captured my eye as well.

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Old 04-15-2008, 06:40 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment, much appreciated

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Old 04-15-2008, 08:39 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Flookyyy View Post
She walks with her head held low,
No one need see her overflowing eyelids and blackened eyes.
She hasn't brushed her hair for days.
She wears long sleeves for a reason.
Crossing roads without looking,
Because the consequences don't seem to matter anymore.
I am sooooo in awe! The vivid images! Wow!

Long sleeves, unkempt appearance, head down to hide the tears coming from blackened eyes, crossing the street without looking because nothing really matters anymore including her personal safety.

My God! (I don't use that phrase lightly) The images of abject dejection and sorrow! It radiates from these few words!! I want more!!!!!!!!!!

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Gail
 

Old 05-23-2008, 08:06 PM   #5 (permalink)
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not sure why gail, but i never noticed your comment on this before!
thank you so much!
im extremely glad you thought so highly of it (: (:
flook xxx
 


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