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Old 05-23-2007, 07:19 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I have made up my mind i am running away
You can not make me i will not stay.
I will run from the truth i will run from the lies
I will run from the tears you make ruin my eyes.
I will run from the hurt you make feel each day
I will run from the smiles you never bring my way
I will run from the suffering i see in this world
I will run from the fact im no longer a little girl.
I will run from the night i will run from the day
I will run from my memories of my childless play.
I will run from my fear i will run from my past
I will run from my hopeless love i knew wouldnt last.
I will run from the pain i will run from the deciet
I will run from the people who i will never get to meet.
I will run from the time you tell me you know best
Theres one thing i cant run from and that is death.
 

Old 05-24-2007, 03:59 AM   #2 (permalink)
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--- This poem is interesting with all of it's repetitive lines. It comes down to the very last line of the poem and it's stated so eloquently:

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Theres one thing i cant run from and that is death.
Yes indeed. I can completely and totally relate to this poem LINZ
There's much courage it takes one to write such a personal poem as this
But the courage definitely shows its self in the last line.

Interesting writing - Thanx for sharing

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Old 05-24-2007, 09:32 PM   #3 (permalink)
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very personal and sad poem Linz its terrible to have to run away but it is elegantly stated
hugs kisses
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