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It's a Lifestyle, Not a Crime.

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Old 05-15-2008, 02:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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She's on the floor and can't get up.
She's had too much yet not enough.
So did you forget about me last night?
Because you never left my mind once.
Fucking for a pastime.
Sickness spawned from lies and lying.
Think of me when the lies come so easily flowing.
And then again when she's lying in your bed.
"I've seen lovers dancing in windows."
-Craigary Michael Owens.
 

Old 05-19-2008, 10:07 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I like the dark tone to this.
 

Old 05-20-2008, 11:51 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Another piece from Flookyyy!! I really love your style and all the things you can portray with so few words...nice, lady!!

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Excellence is the result of caring more than others think is wise, risking more than others think is safe, dreaming more than others think is practical, and expecting more than others think is possible."
 

Old 05-23-2008, 07:55 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thank you for the comment mysticpoet, im glad you like it!
nomad... you're always so nice on your comments to me, and i appreciate it (: thank you very much.
flook x
 


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