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Old 03-09-2008, 08:31 AM   #1 (permalink)
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The Journey

my road leads me far from homeland
but I'll never, ever say goodbye
and I feel better than I ever felt before
waiting for that clear blue wind to take me home again
~
sheaves of diaries weep soliloquies of longing
while footprints claim a new journey’s pulse
etched yet familiar cobblestone paves serenity
my quiescent mind begins to see
~
shimmers of light harbinger a new destination
the neon signs of experience pulse
guiding my striding along as I’m gliding
welcome tidings to which I’m abiding
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and I shall not pause to ponder
at the depths of my new found wonder
I shall instead, tarry just a moment
to breath in the life that does surround me
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breathtaking be the splendor of my newfound existence
rogue waves no longer penetrate my sanctum
my purpose, now crystal clear, moves me forward
I’m ready now, ready to return home a wiser man
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so in the end, one must recall
the starting place from which we roam
your knowledge gained along each quest
should always lead you back to home

A Carson/Robinson/Simoneaux Production



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Old 03-09-2008, 09:42 AM   #2 (permalink)
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i think it came out splendid...well done.
 

Old 03-09-2008, 10:05 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 03-09-2008, 08:52 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I really like the look of this centered and capless...mega kudos!
 

Old 03-12-2008, 05:45 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Wow! You 3 have a nice collaboration - Really nice YAWL! The styles mesh quite nicely - you can tell the distinct style of each Poet - but the tempo is kept nicely so that it makes for an interesting read with different perspectives that lead to the lovely epiphany: You CAN come home again!

Nice rebuke of Thomas Wolfe's "You can't go home again."

Bravo = Nicely done - Thanx for sharing it with the Community!

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