Miscellaneous:

[bloodletting_of_the_sky]

i am disgusted by the brutal destruction of the senses

they fail to recognize the need for awareness in thier life

aspirations and dreams shoved through a manhole of death

taking with it all the hope and faith this world has left

everywhere you see constant struggle to escape

everyone creates thier own fate

they have no knowledge of they have discarded...

simply cause they chose to let it be lost and rot....



bring about a change of future

set about a plan of loss

play God and make life hell

always thinking that no control is condemned

surrender is forbidden... forgiveness never accepted

let the guilt and the wieght of mistakes build on thier plate

this is thier judgement portrayed

[JolieH]

Phillip,
This is an interesting poem, I like how the second stanza mirrors the people you describe in the first stanza. I was a little confused on first reading, but after a couple reads it started to make sense.
Creative thinking!

[Aumakua]

o0o0o0o I like this one too o.o Awesome job on it seriously