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Old 10-09-2007, 11:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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He arrived home,
late again
to find laundry strewn
throughout the apartment.
He flicked on the light,
and there she waited
in the hall, eyes glowing
gnawing his stained brief.
He yanked them from her clenched teeth,
tearing them in two,
loosening a canine.


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Old 10-09-2007, 11:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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LOL...good one! yeah, this was is pretty cool...nice one, Jolie! Very natural and flowing...and of course, in my favorite style.

show him who's the boss

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Old 10-09-2007, 11:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Dear Jolie,

I loved this! lolololol....and it is so beautifully poetic! However, the message is loud and clear! Gett'em girl!!!!!!!...lol My mind went in many directions, and the visual I got would make a fantabulous painting! lol Great write!

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Old 10-10-2007, 05:48 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hey now Jolie,

Wow, there ya go, ladies - guy bashin' at the drop of a hat lol.............

I liked this one too, the visuals were vivid - except........ Now, I hope because I'm a guy hasn't tainted my inner sight, but what I saw was - The guy came home late to feed the dog/ dog gets pissed/ dog makes mess and eats laundry........

I don't know how comfortable I would feel around a girlfriend/wife who would lurk in the halls gnawing on stained briefs just because I came home late....lol....

Jolie, I liked mucho, this is some good penning....
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Old 10-10-2007, 08:57 PM   #5 (permalink)
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LOL,
Lasher figured this one out. It was just the guys golden retriever... LOL
 


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