Miscellaneous:

[deep_poet86]

Alone from the surrounding
world
A perfect pathway to the
land of dead

Lighthouse
You've stolen the sun
with the colors you
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Green and silver
what a strange match
You're rocky cliffs
make up for it
because there’s gold
at the hatch

Men can't get to you
they have died trying
You sit and laugh at
us because we are slowly
denying the famous
landmark you've become

Ugly and merciful at
the same time
You’re probably lonely
So far out from us all
Someone checks you every so
often to change the light thats all

Abandon and afraid
I walk up the path
and slowly
I engage

By: Lee-Ann Wolsey
2/8/2006
11:41 AM

[Jeez]

Nice....nice the way
you have put this
together.

Interesting feel to
it.

Thanks for the
read.

[deep_poet86]

Thanks for the comment Jeez

[PaintedDiary]

Dear Lee-Ann ,

I am lovin this one too! I love when artists focus on the not so obvious, or things, feelings, scenes, that are not really scribed about or taken for granted. I love the feel of this. It has a haunting undertone, yet lovely description, and I love how you blended the teo. Fantabulous. I love the line

"Lighthouse
You've stolen the sun
with the colors you
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You are definitely one to watch, and we are so blessed to have you join our community. I for one monitor, and love to witness young artists evolve in their craft. Thank you for sharing. Beautiful!

{{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}}

[deep_poet86]

Aww, thanks Kim, that was a great comment. Thank you so much

[hassassin]

You know what, I gotta say. I like your style...and to think that randomly hitting the feeling lucky button would do this, xD...the one thing that will stick with me is- "A perfect pathway to the land of the dead"...and also....Avatar=win...MGS3 was my favorite in the series.

[deep_poet86]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by hassassin

You know what, I gotta say. I like your style...and to think that randomly hitting the feeling lucky button would do this, xD...the one thing that will stick with me is- "A perfect pathway to the land of the dead"...and also....Avatar=win...MGS3 was my favorite in the series.

Thank you so much, I really appreciate the warm comments I really like that line too Yeah I love all the MGS games, but 3 so far is my fave by far, again thank you for the comments.