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Old 11-19-2006, 01:55 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I've always wanted to ask people if (1) this makes any sense to them and (2) if so, what does it mean to them. please feel free to comment. i know what i meant when i wrote it but i've been told it could be taken different ways. thanks.

zaac



Shadows collide
With memories
When the wheels
Start turnin round
Keep the sky turned blue
So the wind can find me
Speaking with no sound

Pick your battles
Make your mark
But whatever you do
Don’t shoot in the dark
Cause the ring of gold
Cries crimson red
To the beat of dreams
That echo in my head

Chorus:
It’s the shadow
Of a dream
Of a heart gone numb
That makes the lonely Dance
Tell me why it is
When the lonely dance
It’s always a dance for one





Prophets play
The poets muse
I’ll play the part
Just as I choose
Heart’s in my throat
Magic’s in my eyes
Why is it tears are no surprise

Seems like a dead end circle
But don’t fight the trance
Get a birds eye view
If you get the chance
And if the bird won’t fly
Best find romance
Cause wine tastes bitter
When the lonely dance

Chorus:
It’s the shadow
Of a dream
Of a heart gone numb
That makes the lonely dance
Tell me why it is
When the lonely dance
It’s always a dance for one
 

Old 10-22-2007, 10:41 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Enjoyed this. I love-

It’s the shadow
Of a dream
Of a heart gone numb
That makes the lonely dance
Tell me why it is
When the lonely dance
It’s always a dance for one

Nice to see your poems. I posted some new ones check them out.
I would love to hear this song sung. Beautiful.
Your left foot connects to your right foot.
Your soul connects to the heart.
Your eyes connects to the brain and you see....
The beauty of life standing still on a box of nails digging for rainbows we all want the pain because life is vain but happiness believes in itself.
 

Old 10-23-2007, 10:00 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thanks msytyll,

I am getting the itch to write again, but must first get a handle on money and time. So hopefully I will soon have new stuff. The creative juices are flowing. I am watching your stuff. It is taking on a very mature quality that you can't quite put a finger on.

zaac
 

Old 10-24-2007, 08:36 AM   #4 (permalink)
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It’s the shadow
Of a dream
Of a heart gone numb
That makes the lonely Dance
Tell me why it is
When the lonely dance
It’s always a dance for one......


Its the lonely dance
that makes your feet ache so
Its the lonely dance
that gets your heart growing cold
and no matter how brave
and no matter how bold
theres a lonely dance on this long long road .......

got me writting there .. love this ..Chester
 


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