Miscellaneous:

[Kit Carson]

Sometimes I wonder why
I try'cause it's so hot
and touching the sky
makes you fry
sooner or later I'll cry
what should I do?
drift some more
or
pack it in
are
you aware
of
our mistakes
in living life
it
could have been
so perfect and
all
we ever needed was a smile
sometimes I wonder why

[Altree94]

Unique spacing and a great title -
subject is one that everyone can relate to -
these made it a most interesting read!
- Tree.

[Altree94]

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[Kit Carson]

Thank you very much! It's been around a while. I read it often, it has very deep meaning to me and I always hoped that it would have a reasonance when shared.

[Jer4clarity]

Kit,

I like poems, and have written a few like these, that prompt the reader with the way the words are put down. I enjoyed this poem!

My Fav:

The Following Text Is Quoted:

it
could have been
so perfect and
all
we ever needed was a smile
sometimes I wonder why

Jerry

[Kit Carson]

Thanks Jerry for your kind comments. This one is about 25 years old. I return to read it often.

[Bear]

interesting penning Kit, makes me ponder about some things in my life
handshakes
Bear

[Kit Carson]

Thanks Dude. Was me thinking out loud, about a particular girl, I believed it then and still wonder.

[deep_poet86]

Perfect
Not just because its short and to the point
but a deep meaning shared
Plus I can relate to this writing, makes me think
Great read
Thanks for sharing

[Kit Carson]

Again, thank you very much, it is one of my all time favorites.