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[jakeminick]

Always untimely, a lifting awareness.
Remembrance squandered of fantasy’s gift.
Welcoming days, a gaze of reluctance.
In circling monotony, priorities sift.

Reality falls in sprinkles of weight.
Embracing return of paradoxical sleep.

[Azekiel-Horizon]

Good piece short and to the point I like that. You chose the right words to depict all the emotion very well. Overall good piece Keep dropping these gems called poetry

[jakeminick]

thanks again...kind of depicts a nice face on being lazy i guess.

[MsJacquiiC]

Hi Jake and welcome to the forum - Please familiarize yourself with the JPiC Posting Policy as well as the forum etiquette section. Also - feel free to introduce yourself over at the Member Introductions section.

Regarding your poem - I like it. It inspires deep thought, nice word placement. Very nice use of English for such a tiny poem, not a word wasted.

I think rather than laziness perhaps this piece is a theme on inspired bordom LOL - Perhaps like some sort of lethargic thought process right before consciousness fades away to nap. Inspired bordom of a different plane. Metaphysical transcendence of some sort happens here. Lucid searching. Nice title.

Okay- I'm rambling... Anyway - thanks for the share. I look forward to reading more of your stuff and hope you feel inspired to comment other Members' writing as well

Jacquii.