Miscellaneous:

[Bear]

The Memory of Her Voice

The sound of her voice, is like a butterfly
As it drifts along, lazily , lovely, with out a care
The words fall from her lips like a butterfly flits its wings
A voice as beautiful as evening songs floating in the wind
The sound of her voice brightens my day but the moment soon fades away
And all I have is nothing but the memory of your voice

[PaintedDiary]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Bear

The Memory of Her Voice

The sound of her voice, is like a butterfly
As it drifts along, lazily , lovely, with out a care
The words fall from her lips like a butterfly flits its wings
A voice as beautiful as evening songs floating in the wind
The sound of her voice brightens my day but the moment soon fades away
And all I have is nothing but the memory of your voice

Dear Bear,

This is beautiful as I expected it to be...lol...I made a few suggestions in bold as well. This poem lingers as your poems do and one can almost feel the song. Stunning Bear.

Kim

[Bear]

thank you so much Painted sometimes writing late at night I had letters lol thinking Im just using the singlular form thank you for your great comment
hugs kisses
bear

[Eric]

Bear,
This is awesome, beautiful words man. BRAVO. You inspire me, keep it up

[Bear]

Thank you so much Eric and I am happy that I inspire you keep up the great writing
handshakes
bear