Miscellaneous:

{These are lyrics..and probably the kind you need to hear the music with}

Going once
Now going twice
One more chance
To claim your vice

Take it now
Or leave it here
Either way,
My voice you'll hear

Take this liquid
From my hands
Drown me in
A full blood rant
Nothing can be the same after this
but I still hope you won't miss

Screaming matches and make up sex
Random make outs put to the test
Is love dispersing through this text?

Please just kill me now
I didn't make you what you are
Throw this out and drop the ball
I didn't make you what you are

I swore I'd help you out of this
Too bad you never wanted it
So look where you are now
How cold is the ground?
Will you let me in?

Straight to the punches
and skip the fight
These suicide threats
Will show the light
So get me out of this!

Please just kill me now
I didn't make you what you are
Throw it out and drop the ball
I didn't make you what you are

It has a very nice flow to it, well done!



Paul

[[Beautiful+Danger]]

Not bad, it has a nice rhythm to it. I like this stanza best:

Screaming matches and make up sex
Random make outs put to the test
Is love dispersing through this text?

Very well written.