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Old 01-17-2008, 11:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Its not lemon squeezy-fucking easy,
so don't you be leavin' without believin',
just how much it'll fuck you up.
Screaming for every breath, living on every death,
we live...eating the mind killer!
Like we died on the train tracks
got stabbed real deep in the back
It's still a little bit hazy
and even though only crazy knows bravery,
and only lazy knows crazy
I'm still lying on my bloody back
fucked up on train tracks
 

Old 01-20-2008, 12:02 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I love this one..very in your face kind of writing..all my thumbs are up!
 

Old 01-20-2008, 11:02 PM   #3 (permalink)
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this is raw and not holding back. nice read
 

Old 01-21-2008, 05:31 PM   #4 (permalink)
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^_^ thanks you guys
 

Old 01-23-2008, 03:57 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Very nice. I'm taken back by your bluntness. It almost causes trauma. I thought I suffered from addiction once, but after reading your poem I'm not sure. Write on!
 

Old 01-28-2008, 12:13 AM   #6 (permalink)
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well thanks blindbee... : | idk if I want to cause anyone trauma though, lol
 

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There is physical addiction and there is mental addiction...the mental is the one that leaves us cold long after any of the physical part is gone. I have only passing experience with the physical side, but many years of coping with the mind killer. Well done Alex.
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hmmm...almost sounds like you might actually be ON the fast train...instead of lying on the tracks...but it's a very high energy piece and it grabs the attention all the way through...good going!

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