04-06-2008, 05:34 PM
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Re: From My Own Mold
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Originally Posted by erikestabrook
We were molded from the Earth
Why is death not even enough to break us out of this mold?
Dear Erik,
 Such attention this poem demands! I could not pick out a favorite anything without quoting the entire poem. If I had to pick fav lines, the above highlighted seem to linger for me...such power and color in those lines! This poem does indeed make one think and could very easily be turned into a prose piece or a storem, however it jumps with radiance as a poem. The message is clear and one may be tempted to re-evaluate their path to some degree as well. Awesome take on the concept and a message full of vision on the front line....AWESOME!
Kim
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