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My Piano Love III (Cinquain)

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Old 04-06-2007, 11:49 PM   #1 (permalink)
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My Piano Love III Cinquain

Spirit
in my fingers
right hand danced melody
left; danced gospel chords so sweet on
Sunday


For those who asked to see and were interested in viewing "My Piano I"and "My Piano II"...it is posted below.

My Piano Love II (Cinquain)

It is
hard and creamy
tickles my ear drum so
hearing the ivory of the
"F" note



My Piano Love I

When I rest my eager hands against the keyboard
my fingers transform with each ivory key
I succumb to the song of your sea
embrace every wave
move deeply
with your extraordinary energy
your power

With each black key
I enchant you
resonate with you
make magic with you
my melodious silhouette
echoes with you

Pedals satisfy
a lingering desire
to touch you
play you
no one knew

about me
and my Piano.


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Old 04-07-2007, 04:06 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Kim...,

It is wonderous what
our fingers can do when,

we have a musical
instrument clasped
between then or
laid on it.

Yours... seem to
bewitch any...

instruments you
choose arouse.

Thanks for your
writes.
 

Old 04-07-2007, 09:26 PM   #3 (permalink)
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My Dearest Jeez,

Thank you so much Jeez for taking precious time to read and respond. I love to read your comments Jeez, as they always make me smile, and feel good. This one made me smile, feel good, and shed a few tears. I am so thankful and honored that you enjoy the writes. Love Ya'!

{{{~~**KIM**~~}}}
 

Old 04-09-2007, 12:19 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Kim...,

Yours... seem to
bewitch any...

instruments you
choose arouse.

Thanks for your
writes.

LOL Ms Jeez...guess you gotta watch your instruments around me, lolol. thanks again.

{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}
 

Old 04-27-2007, 12:38 AM   #5 (permalink)
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With each black key
I enchant you
resonate with you
make magic with you
my melodious silhouette
echoes with you
Interesting series MS PAINTED --- I'm reading some very nice poetry this evening and this trio is right up there with the best!

Reading between the lines **cough, cough, cough** My Piano #1 is simply a magnificent display of unity!

Great write - Thanx for the sharing

Jacquii.



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his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
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Old 04-27-2007, 03:27 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Dear Ms Jacquii,

Thank you for taking precious time to read and comment on my piano series. I am humbled by your comment. I plan to write 2 more to complete this series, and also accompany with artwork. Thank you so much.

{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}
 

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