Miscellaneous:

[Flookyyy]

Please do this one thing for me
Though it's more courtesy than I showed you.
Fluttering eyes which don't dare glance away
Lips that overlook the fidelity rulebook.
Secretive plans and discussions kept low
I know what you're doing.

[nomadicrhymer]

Flookyyy -I edited to fix "glance" and "fidelity". This is a bit of a mystery, and I like it like that...it leaves us guessing different scenarios...I absolutely love the title...indeed...

New Jersey Has More To Offer!

Nomad

[Flookyyy]

Ah. Thanks for the corrections.
And thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it.

xo

[butchiesmom]

Nomad's right! This does leave us guessing as to what's to come or what's already happening. I love your poetry! It spells out what no one else is willing to admit.

Great job, again!
Gail

[nomadicrhymer]

aha! I got the general drift of that, but didn't know it was personal...actually though, reading it by light of day it's crystal clear...brain is fuzzy at 1:00am! lol!

Deliciously devious little piece, this. The second line throws one off track, then the rest of it comes from behind and grabs you.

Nomad

[Flookyyy]

Haha thanks!
All of my poetry draws from personal experience, I just choose to portray them in a more abstract way... It's more fun when you're kept guessing I find

xo