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Norwegian Wood: Woman of Medano Creek

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Old 10-10-2006, 07:00 PM   #1 (permalink)
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the wind uncovered the
Indian fire rings...Sloane met
Woman of Medano Creek, apple,
Beatles white on the inside, Rita Coolidge
red on the outside,

two soft females grating
their sex into the night like
two ponderosa pines rubbing
together, Woman of Medano Creek
and Sloane, their curvy silhouettes falling
onto the fabric of my tent, Norwegian Wood,
I rubbed my ruged knob, the raven's distant cry
only heightened the sense of climax, Shawnee women
have their own notions of prosperity and sexual freedom,

Woman of Medano Creek
and Sloane exemplified me to
a challenge, I kind of like that because
the voyeur surfaced in me and their currents
of lovemaking allowed me to pull myself off at
the pace of a museum stroll, stimulating me, tempting
my exertion, coming hard, knowledge to me is the Rocky
Mountain's greatest gift,

oblivious, I stepped from my tent,
the mirage teasing me with lustful visions,
I tipped my jerrican and doused myself with
cold water, the Indian fire rings now circled with
charcoal and bones,

in reality, there is no
reason not to believe I,
Sloane, did not fuck Woman
of Medano Creek last eve, remnants
of her tent stakes daring me to find my
way down into the canyon,

I, Sloane, put my
canoe into the water
and joined the Colorado
at the confluence, Norwegian
Wood, paddled into late afternoon,
a woman's shadow lengthened, the canyon
rim flared red, then lavender, a woman motioning
to me from atop Temptation Stone guided my heat,
standing at the foot of her bedroll, her tent stakes daring
me to find my way down, I kissed her ruged knob jumping
flames from her charcoal softness below her navel fire ring,
Woman of Medano Creek said, "the ore ran out at the turn
of the century, I saved you a nugget, Sloane..."


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Old 10-10-2006, 07:18 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Didn't know before
that anybody could
get as worked up until
you started:

""teasing me with lustful
visions""

Which brought out:
""the voyeur surfaced in
me""

of peeken into your
writes as if a window.

Thanks for leaveing the
curtians open just a crack
to view out your window.

Great music and write
Thanks Again Sage.


How did you get your name
in this colour??
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Old 10-11-2006, 01:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi Jeez,

Thank you for stopping by, I think I saw you yesterday atop a rock on another site of mine, you're a valued fan and friend and I cherish you. Yes, Sweetwater gold washes the centuries with lustful voyeurism. I'll leave the curtain open a peak...feel free to look anytime....I'm the one with large twin peaks and the jerrican dousing my nugget with cold water...

Sage
 

Old 10-15-2006, 01:36 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hey Lavender!!!

Ms Lavender...I have never in my life seen any kind of writing as yours! So original, unique, and so.....sexy!!
LOL!!!! I am not going to lie, that music set me right on the trail for Medano Creek, LOL!!!!! I feel enchanted reading your poetry, like there is a spell, or I am simply memorized. The lesson, the story, the music, the history, the language, the ....ok.....even the women are awesome! As I have said before Ms Lavender, reading your work is such a treat...like OK, here is another Ms Sage write...I must sit down, get comfy, and please do not bother me! lol I am completely speechless with this. Simply a masterpeice....is all I can say. Keep'm comin' Ms Lavender!! Thank you for sharing. Luv Ya'. Take Care!


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