Miscellaneous:

[mysticpoet729]

The other side

Please don't send me to the other side.
You wouldn't like me if you did.
I'll change into another being.
My eyes will flare,
My skin will boil.
I'll roar like the Leo,
while shooting off words of the devil.
Losing control,
Of my body and psyche.
Trying to struggle,
To get into neutral.
So please don't send me to the other side.
You wouldn't like me if you did.

[nomadicrhymer]

I like the fact that this is a big question and doesn't really give clear clues as to what's going on...very good write!!

Trying to figure out what it's about...someone getting "me" angry and thereby being responsible for "me" turning into a "dragon" maybe? I am curious, though as to why the poem says "please don't SEND ME", Fabiola...as though a 3rd party is responsible for the emotions of "me". Aren't we all responsible for our own emotions and where we let them "take" us?

Nomad

[MsJacquiiC]

Yeah - this poem is a bit mysterious FABIOLA - I'm not exactly sure what this "other side" you speak of is all about - but if it includes shooting off words of the devil - I will certainly agree that you probably don't want to even go there, nor have anyone send you there LOL

Interesting read = Thanx for sharing

Jacquii.

[mysticpoet729]

thanks for the critique. i was writing about anger and how you can take me there. the anger is the other side.