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Old 07-17-2006, 07:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Our Love Gone Wrong



Fade
Fade to dust
All our love had gone away
I miss what we had
Somehow I thought that it would stay

So I came to your house
And outside I found a mouse
I put him in your bed
Would it be too strong honey dear
If I told you that once I wished that you were dead

I watched you for four weeks
And then when I found you I couldn't speak
So I climbed into your car
On that night that you planned to drive real far
When I climbed out you were with your friends
Oh how it seemed the night would never end

I climbed up on the cliffs
Set a stinkbomb off and threw waterballoons at your friends
I slashed the wheels on your cars
If you don't love me now I don't know how
To get your love back Tell me now

I've got you all alone
Your friends just ran off because they are stoned
I told you I've got this knife
But it was made of plastic
Don't you see how I feel for you
Other men wouldn't steal for you
Like I stole that knife
And those bombs And this rose
Can I touch your toes
Don't plug your nose
I know I haven't washed for a while
When you're on a mission for your smile
You can't worry about anything but your love
Will you marry me I got this ring
Yeah I stole it too
What am I to do
I'm just a poor boy rich with you
 

Old 09-30-2006, 12:01 AM   #2 (permalink)
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This was a very powerful minx of word play, pain, sorrow, and hope. It reads to me as if it was written by someone else True. As if you were having a moment so strong. The pain of such a deep love unreciprocated at a point in your life much needed. I am sorry, this did not get read sooner. As always, I am in awe of your talent, and diverse writing palette. I felt the words, and was there with you.

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