Pencilis~

Moonchild · 09-13-2007, 11:09 PM

Thank you Mysty for pointing out
those little grammar errors. Will fix them.
I'm so glad you liked it, cool

Mysty · 09-14-2007, 12:49 AM

Don't thank me Sweetie .... you are the one who is Awesome for sharing this treasure with us. Thank You!!

Moonchild · 09-14-2007, 08:18 AM

I just always say thank you.
I post on lots of boards and it's force of habit I guess.
You're welcome then

MsJacquiiC · 09-14-2007, 05:58 PM

Hi KAREN - What a brilliant poem - I love the metaphor and flowery language you used.

The Following Text Is Quoted:

of expression he sometimes
channels into my muse and leads
my hand across the papyrus of
time to spread whispering
words of his lead language
of love which I so happily follow.

I couldn't help myself but smile at this poem as I sort of feel the same way about my Pen LOL - Of course my Pen has taken a vacation along with my Muse it seems - but always good to see such an inspirational poem - Kinda makes me wanna find the god Pencilis!

Very nice poem and I thanx you for sharing it

Jacquii.

Moonchild · 09-15-2007, 01:34 AM

Thank you for reading and replying Jacquii.
My muse has taken a vacation it seems too.
I wrote this like last year. I appreciate your reply

MsJacquiiC · 09-15-2007, 03:18 AM

Of course you prolly know I did a google search

--- I did see that it was submitted to some forum in February or some such - doesn't take away from the poignancy of your write MS KAREN - It's a thoroughly enjoyable piece of poetry - It's one for any season, any temperature, any time.... Seems the prerequisite is simply a love for the pencil, poetry and paper. I can surely appreciate it

Jacquii.

Moonchild · 09-15-2007, 09:17 AM

Yeah Jacquii I post on other forums.
The one you probably saw was "The Peaceful Pub."
I wrote this in 2005 cause like I said my muse has been on vacation lately.
Glad you liked it and enjoyed.

JolieH · 09-15-2007, 09:52 AM

Moonchild,

I love this, it describes such a warm relationship with with your inspiration, and the image
is so fitting. He does look like a pencil, and the idea of him being a wizard makes him even stronger. All he needs now is a pink hat. LOL

Moonchild · 09-15-2007, 05:31 PM

Thank you Jolie...lol
He'd look kinda strange in a pink hat!
Glad ya liked