Miscellaneous:

[TheBlackPoet]

Something about a chick with phat pussy lips.
Usually found on thick chicks with juju lips
I like'em with quick wit
Standing up tits
And can back it up a bit

My homeboy hooked me up with this bangin broad
She was ghetto and packed metal
And everything she said ended with
"For real tho"

I'm from the burbs where we travel 25 miles to buy herb
This homegirl was in the thick of the shit
She sold three-finger dime bags and bragged
She was the best at licking clits
And stroking dicks

She wasn't the best pick
But she was thick
Like the chicks in bootytalk flicks
I just had to see that shit

This lil momma was tight as hell
Not only was she phat, but covered in tats as well
She even had her favorite no-tel

I like how she played with a nigga's mind
She could strip and grind
She had skill and that shit's hard to find

Story be told, she charged a fee; she said "young pussy aint free"
Young with a flat gut and a thick butt
It didn't take long to get that nut

All in all it was a worth while transaction
I got the phat from the back
And a sucking to my satisfaction.....

[MsJacquiiC]

Oh My - Testing the JPiC no-censorship policy are we?

Anyway - I would say what an interesting piece - but I didn't find it that interesting actually LOL --- I've heard it before on BET and seen it before in the streets/the-hood

Anyway - one interesting line I found sort of intriguing:
I like how she played with a nigga's mind

As an official No-Drama-Mama --- It always behooves me to think that men like women to play head-games with them... Odd actually - but anyway - cliche: "to each their own" AND "it takes all kinds...."

Jacquii.

[nomadicrhymer]

BP - I think some things are better left unsaid...still a little too graphic for me...I did read bits of it though...but it seems to me now, with the "n" word being used here...and I realize that it's all game in poetry, and the arts, etc. (I guess!) but aren't we trying to wean it out of conversation altogether...I think reading it in anything drags it back to the forefront of the reader's mind...remember...they have to consciously sound out the word to read the poem. What do you think?

Nomad

[TheBlackPoet]

yeah..., i invited Jacq to remove this one and the other two i posted.... and it would be no problem....... while i can't apologize for the expression, sometimes, i can exceed the boundaries... and i think, this and the other two did that...