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Old 03-12-2008, 05:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Poetry in Flight

temptation’s hand maps out my fate
new worlds I seek to satiate
my ever-growing mind's desire
a constant fuel that feeds the fire
~
I take the world inside of me
and convert it so that you can see
everything that ever was dreamt
joining the flow with all was ever wept
~
no ersatz character to shadow my depth
once sotto voce, now a gravitas vignette
shards of menagerie mirrors reflect
the real me, no mask, and not perfect
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contemplative visions arise
flash of brilliance before my eyes
my feet are lifted from the earth
hovering I pass through the firth
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and from the heights I do scribe
the taste of all the emotions I imbibe
passing through that which was never past
going straight to the heart of what will last
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I’m aloft, amplifying my rhythmical wings
weaving tapestries of linguistic strings
heart pumps prisms of lyrical potpourri
painting words in brilliant lapis lazuli
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a song in time, as words doth rhyme
along the lines, webs intertwine
my flight, caught tight, silken delight
start of my plight, this dreamer’s fight
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soaring through the seamless azure sky
touching the highest periphery never asking why
I live within the arms of a pure and faultless love
holding in my hand for all a simple snow white turtle dove
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snapshots of my life, ethereal and diamond-esque
gossamer memories fill my heart's treasure chest
revealed on aged parchment, my soul's layers unfold
one page at a time, a glorious plight is told

A Simoneaux/Carson/Robinson Production


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Old 03-12-2008, 06:11 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I felt the power of this while it was in process. Hard to describe...so different from writing alone...your close was brilliant Kim. I think this will be around for a while.
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Old 03-12-2008, 07:20 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I felt the power of this while it was in process. Hard to describe...so different from writing alone...your close was brilliant Kim. I think this will be around for a while.
Dear Kit (and Scott),

Thank you so much. I agree. Scott delivered a powerful first stanza and the kinetic energy continued to run. Thank you for the opportunity to "poeticise" with you both...lol...this is stunning.

Kim
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Old 03-13-2008, 12:00 AM   #4 (permalink)
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wow this is an awesomely talented collaboration...... it is like you are telling the tale of an Angel's life. Simply exquisite poetry folks..... Job WELL Done!!!

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Old 03-13-2008, 03:34 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Excellent rhyming, beautiful words and message of poetry.
This is such a gem and the talent really shines from all three.
A wonderful and pleasing collaboration!


Nightlife calls me.
Through her I am free.
It's the only way to be,
all caught up in a mystery!
Born with full moon fever,
I can make you a believer!
For I am the moonchild,
truly born to be wild!
 


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