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Old 01-20-2008, 10:53 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Pretty Brown Eyes

He has a certain look,
That would make his mama proud,
He has a smile.
That would light up a room.
He has a deep smooth voice.
that would make a woman melt.
He wore gold all over,
that would blind you.
and his eyes,
His soft brown eyes shines through the light.
But look through them carefully.
they may be pretty,
But they're telling you something.
He's not what you thought he would be.
So turn around,
Don't look back.
He may be a dream.
But his pretty brown eyes,
will put you back to reality.
the "mystic" one

you can't spend ypur life swimming in the shallow end of the pool. pretty soon you hae to try the deep end.
 

Old 02-17-2008, 03:24 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Wow Mysticpoet!

How I loved this poem. Pretty Brown Eyes I can relate to your words. My hubby of eighteen years has those pretty brown eyes.

Thanks for sharing. It was very beautiful. It is now one of my favorites.

Blessings
Sally
Forestdawn
Goddess of the green grove.
Honor the old ones in deed and name
let love and light be our guides again.
 

Old 02-17-2008, 03:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi Fabiola,

My Dad always used to say..... Blue eyed people are down a quart and brown eyed people are full of Sh.t ........ Funnily enough I have a sister with brown eyes lol... and yeah she is usually full of it lol. But to tell the truth I love eyes.... all colors. Windows to the soul they are. I like the way you have written this .... dress it up good only to be served a warning. I wish all warnings came this way Beautiful write Fabiola

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Mysty battling demons on the run,
taking seeds of strength from fights
to plant in those who do not have
the strength to believe in themselves.


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Old 02-22-2008, 03:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Wonderful poem.

Thanks for sharing.
 

Old 02-27-2008, 09:23 PM   #5 (permalink)
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thank you very much. "blushing"
 


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