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A Queen Forever

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Old 06-09-2007, 07:13 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Years have past since fairy dust
has dropped from the open cracks
in the ceiling
Nights of cold visions have finnally
vanished my golden soul
Secrets still are within
but those are only mine to know

I have been to many places and
seen many things
Some people touched me
and others just caused pain

Then there was one
who did not want to be alone
He was drunk on a bench
asking me
"Are you my queen?"
He repeated over and over again
Even when I said no
Finnaly I had to let him know
"I am no ones queen
I am a free soul traveling anywhere
without stares and stress"
He laughed and said I was an
unknown mess

Thoughts and feelings kept
growing inside of me
Then somethig happened
So strange
Suddenly I wanted to be someones
queen and suddenly I wanted to be loved

But suddenly is the problem you see
Ussually it goes away
I do not want feelings that do this
I want thoughts and dreams
that last forever

By: Lee-Ann Wolsey
06/08/07
7:36AM
 

Old 06-09-2007, 08:04 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Dear Lee-Ann,

Very nice write, and one to ponder upon, We all in some way "wish" to be someone's queen., even to ourselves at times. I also believe the desire to to be someone's queen is healthy. That lets me know that already, I have built the self confidence needed to be capable of love, loving my self, and willing to share myself with someone. Thanks for the read. A few spellings need correction hun. Awesome write!

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Old 06-12-2007, 07:20 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thank you PaintedDiary
Yeah I know my grammer sucks, lol
Ah well, at least you liked it, again thanks
 


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