Miscellaneous:

[PaintedDiary]

Release

Cracked is a heart
pouring open sands of encased tears
rotting flesh reflects a mesa
wind chimes sound of loneliness

Bittersweet dances from every cell
past lives release burdens
tomorrow I will reincarnate

a smile

[Mysty]

Wow Kim...... love how it circles around back to a smile : ) Awesome write.

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wind chimes sound of loneliness

This is my favorite line and I loved the whole poem.


Love ya

Mysty

[PaintedDiary]

Awwww thanks Mysty for taking time to read and comment. I am very grateful. I really don't quite know what my inspiration was for this one yet..lol...however, I smiled at the end. When you have time, I have another short poem in spiritual called Silent Grace, that I would love for you to read. Thank you so much again Mysty. I really did not want the poems to go in the "unread" pile...

Kim

[JONATHAN]

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Originally Posted by PaintedDiary

Bittersweet dances from every cell
past lives release burdens
tomorrow I will reincarnate

a smile

... Profound hope, made me sigh !

[SuzyQ]

ahhhh yes, Kimberly, a beautiful thought wrapped up in your poetic words.
To me, this describes the "wanting" to let go of something painful and be able to move on.

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Originally Posted by PaintedDiary

tomorrow I will reincarnate

a smile

Those lines are why I thought that this is just about "wanting". It's always easier to say tomorrow isn't it? And like the well known phrase... "Tomorrow never comes". How very poignant.

SuzyQ

[PaintedDiary]

Thank you so much Jonathan and SuzyQ for taking time to read and comment on my lil poem. I appreciate the comments and poetic love. I have not written any poetry in a while, and truly miss writing. Just wishing for more poetry pleasure time in my life. Don't we all. Thank you.


Painted Diary

[erikestabrook]

what a profound little package of dynamite this poem was

[zaac]

me likey this much. isssooooo kool

zaac...in a zany state of mind