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Old 12-27-2007, 10:46 PM   #1 (permalink)
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The Ride

You start out in a neutral level.
Then the fun begins.
Your throat's bone dry.
Your pulse is racing.
your heart is pounding.
Faster and faster,
Louder and louder.
Not knowing where you are going.
Left or right.
No, up or down,
Just driving you up the wall.
Now you are slowing down.
and all your energy is drained.
Thank you for hopping on,
and I'll see you very soon.
the "mystic" one

you can't spend ypur life swimming in the shallow end of the pool. pretty soon you hae to try the deep end.
 

Old 12-29-2007, 08:35 PM   #2 (permalink)
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a bit cryptic but never the less well done
 

Old 01-06-2008, 06:02 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Dear Fabiola,

Could this be LIFE ? If so, I like the last line, indicating that there is more ....

Love
Alan
Father, Poet, and Part-time Philosopher
 

Old 01-14-2008, 09:27 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thanks for the comments. I was talking about stress. at one point, people thought I was talking about sex.
 


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