Miscellaneous:

[PaintedDiary]

The Scriptwriter


One bottle half empty
of malachite tears
shards of glass potpourri
she was once there
long ago paints like now
new sand of mirrors
mistakes play on piano
she is still there
regrets plucked by
Eagle talons
she wrote the script
long ago
open the curtain
once more
and she is
center stage

[erikestabrook]

Kim this one was so clever,
I feel like a sap givig everyone 5 stars but its only cause their producing really unique best poetry I've seen

[Jer4clarity]

Kim,

You seem so free lately...good to see you so cheerful. My Fav:

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One bottle half empty
of malachite tears

You absolutely hooked me with this line!

Jerry

[PaintedDiary]

Dear Erik and Jerry, thank you both for taking precious time to read and to comment.

Erik...we are an everlasting pool of words, and yours are so amazingly romantic lately...hmmm..lol...Love Ya!

Jerry.....I am glad I hooked ya! I ain't lettin' go either!!! Thanks Jerry, and after our Phone Conversation...I am...Free ..Thanx...Love Ya!

PD

[KayaOtah]

Well, I think many poems are beyond 5 star, they're wonderful, PD's too.
*smiles*

[Mysty]

Kim..... this is BEAUTIFUL .... so full and rich with images and meanings. I find I am really loving your newest works, this one notwithstanding.. truly AWESOME!!!

Love

Mysty

[PaintedDiary]

Thank you so much everyone for taking precious time to read and to comment. Kaya and Mysty thank you so much. My new work is really interesting Mysty because I am not looking, I am just writing. Even though it is or does not feel controlled and I don't know how I feel about that yet, my words come freely, and I refuse to go back and change anything. Thank you so much. Love Ya!

Kim

[PaintedDiary]

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Originally Posted by Mysty

Kim..... this is BEAUTIFUL .... so full and rich with images and meanings. I find I am really loving your newest works, this one notwithstanding.. truly AWESOME!!!

Love

Mysty

Dear Mysty,

Thank you again, and I am so grateful. This one is one of my favorites, and I think wherever the place is where I am writing from these days, I will stay for awhile. Thank you soooo much. Love Ya!

Kim

[PaintedDiary]

This has been accepted in a very prestigious literary magazine, along with my artwork Sisters also.

Kim

[MsJacquiiC]

Nice - it's an eyeopening stanza MS KIM - I like the way you actually "fit" a timeline of sorts into the poem AND in so many few lines - Not a word wasted here - And the theme is perfection really - Epitomizes a scriptwriter very well actually - Perhaps even one who knows the rags-to-riches story - Seems like the narrator/character was down-and-out or some such - and through talent - doors are opened and BAM! Center Stage!

A very nice write MS KIM - I can see why MC would publish!
Congrats and thanx for the brilliant share

Jacquii.