Miscellaneous:

[MsJacquiiC]

This poem I wrote as a response to PAINTED DIARY's http://jpicforum.info/creativity-out...se-5018-2.html -- It's quite a nice exercise and I invite ALL MEMBERS to try it!

Hope you like.

Jacquii.
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Shall You Be Mine?

A fond blushing, eyes overpowering.
She travelled. Her lips renewed
the sometimes beautiful whisper of apathy
in my gazing and languid respiration.

She is hateful and strange.

I am in the sobs of her tumultuous, breathing
face. Again burning fast.
Hot cheeks. My hand is almost
like the ardour of a lover: embarrassed.

Shall you be mine?

You. The one I pressure so.
For ever my rose-dressed companion.



Copyright © 2007 Jacquii Cooke

[Sally Roberts]

WOW! MsJacquii

You have done a superb job putting the pieces together! It's not easy to do.
I know cause I create word lists of magnetic poetry for another one of my poetry groups and it's fun, yet a real challenge to make poems from them. I commend you on your great poem here.

Now you have got my interest up again. I'm definetly going to have to try my hand at making a magnetic poem too.

Thanks for sharing. It's a great piece of work!

Blessings

[Ariono-jovan Labu]

splendid display of creativity sistah- soul... i must try this exercise, may spark so much needed inspiration yeah. you do poetry justice. one-

[Smiley24_7]

This is amazing.
The imagery and detail are wonderful!

I feel as though I am there.. asking the same question...

Great job!

[Terence]

It must be a good exercise to come up with a result like this. Of course, it takes an exceptional poet to know what works well together and you are certainly that, MsJ.

[MsJacquiiC]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Sally Roberts

WOW! MsJacquii

You have done a superb job putting the pieces together! It's not easy to do.
I know cause I create word lists of magnetic poetry for another one of my poetry groups and it's fun, yet a real challenge to make poems from them. I commend you on your great poem here.

Now you have got my interest up again. I'm definetly going to have to try my hand at making a magnetic poem too.

Thanks for sharing. It's a great piece of work!

Blessings

Thanx SALLY - It was really run too - I just hope others try there hand at the Creativity Outlet exercise KIM wrote - It's great for inspiring creativity

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Ariono-jovan Labu

splendid display of creativity sistah- soul... i must try this exercise, may spark so much needed inspiration yeah. you do poetry justice. one-

Hey ARIONO!!! Glad to see you online! Thanx so much for your comment - Yeah... We actually have quite a few writing exercises and challenges in our Creativity Outlet - You may be interested in many - especially the most recent 2

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Smiley24_7

This is amazing.
The imagery and detail are wonderful!

I feel as though I am there.. asking the same question...

Great job!

Thanx SMILEY - I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment my poem!
I'm glad you liked the imagery and detail I put into it!

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Terence

It must be a good exercise to come up with a result like this. Of course, it takes an exceptional poet to know what works well together and you are certainly that, MsJ.

Oh My You flatter me TERENCE - And I LOVE it LOL... Anyway - it IS indeed a wonderful writing exercise - I hope more Members try it actually - It's one of the exercises that inspired JPiC Magnet Poetry --- At anyrate - I do thank you so much for your wonderful comment --- ALSO hope to see your answer to the challenge (http://jpicforum.info/creativity-out...cise-5018.html) I think it's so wonderful to see what different works can come out of using the same words

Also as an FYI - I too posted a nice challenge of sorts you may be interested in: http://jpicforum.info/creativity-out...enge-5011.html
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Once again - Thanx to you all for reading and commenting on my poem!
It was really a lot of fun to write and to see your wonderful comments makes it all worth while

Jacquii.

[stardust]

Dear Ms. Jacquii:
I may say WOOOWWW again!! Your style is really awesome!! I admire you so much, Ms. Jacquii. Your poetic inspirations are overflowing, and your special muse fills my cup to the brim. God bless you, Ms. Jacquii, in all you do!!
I take this special moment to wish you MERRY CHRISTMAS and HAPPY NEW YEAR 2008!! I am sure, the new incoming year will bring more success and greater achievements on your way, Ms. Jacquii.
(((Hugs and Love))) Warm Regards, Starry.

[MsJacquiiC]

Oh My! So happy you like my poem MS STARRY! Thanx so much for your lovely comment and well wishes! I hope you are enjoying your holiday season as well - Only the best for JPiC Artistes!

Jacquii.

[Burk28]

Wonderful piece of writing here, I am brand new to the site, still finding my way around, glad that your piece was the first one that iread, well done

[MsJacquiiC]

Hi BILL - thank you very kindly! And Welcome to the Community!

I actually did a bit of editing on this piece, renamed it Rose-Dressed Companion and included it in a call for submissions I recently answered... The above is written directly from the challenge/exercise words - but the edited version spices it up just a bit - I think I may post it ---> http://jpicforum.info/emotional-roma...nion-5250.html

Again Thanx = I'm glad you liked it

Jacquii.