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Old 05-26-2007, 04:26 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Oh shutup! Your false kisses and
candy-drop hugs
I pluck your own eyes out
and eat them
like Chinese delicasy:
I deserve to see.

The severed veins
such horrible pain
I eat and feast my belly
on. Gutteral screams
I know. Being demeaned
slapped, japped, talking crap
I know. I feast on it.

And though the harvest let go
a fluid and festival glow,
such turmoiled seas know
fireflies and my love! Gnats
dismissed from below,
you fear me and
my boots are more than human.

I smash termites through your skull
I feast on the maggots,
they are as delicasy
to me. I bow furiously
again and again and again
and again I pick delicate
flowerstems from your decripid brain.

Yet - I not glow in your pain
luminescent and piquing interest.

I'm the devil. And you are
God.

I laugh at you. Roughly
and raucously.

Smile for me.


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“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before
his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---
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Old 05-26-2007, 11:47 AM   #2 (permalink)
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wow it feels good to be outdone in the twisted category,

cool poem
 

Old 05-26-2007, 12:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Ms Jacquii,

What a roller coaster ride into the depths of the subconscious. This is a fantabulous write!! Emotion just drippin with painful viscosity. Awesome!! Can you teach me to write like that? LOL As always, it is and has Ms Jacquii's unique signature on it!! Loved this! Gave an excellent rating!

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Old 05-26-2007, 03:53 PM   #4 (permalink)
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MsJacquii:
Breathless I may say.
I was holding my breath all the way through as I read this one.

Indeed an eye opener for sure. Great imagery to say the least.
Greatly twisted and vivid.

Whew! It was unique. good job.
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let love and light be our guides again.
 

Old 05-26-2007, 09:47 PM   #5 (permalink)
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wow it feels good to be outdone in the twisted category,

cool poem
LOL - an honor your words are to me
Glad you enjoy

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Ms Jacquii,

What a roller coaster ride into the depths of the subconscious. This is a fantabulous write!! Emotion just drippin with painful viscosity. Awesome!! Can you teach me to write like that? LOL As always, it is and has Ms Jacquii's unique signature on it!! Loved this! Gave an excellent rating!

{{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}}
NICE - Thanx for the rating.
Yeah - this was a fantastically emotional write for me
Thanx for the commentary KIM

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MsJacquii:
Breathless I may say.
I was holding my breath all the way through as I read this one.

Indeed an eye opener for sure. Great imagery to say the least.
Greatly twisted and vivid.

Whew! It was unique. good job.
LOL - thanx very much SALLY
I'm glad you like the imagery I put forth with this one.
But GIRL - you may breath now


Thanx YAWL for the AWESOME comments.
I'm glad you enjoyed this strangely unique look into my psyche

Jacquii.



“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before
his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---
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Old 05-26-2007, 10:20 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Ms J....,

If you ever send
out invatations to
dinner....

it would be nice if
'm not on the list.

'd prefer to be
drank.... .

 

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Old 05-29-2007, 06:32 AM   #7 (permalink)
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LOL - OK = Thanx JEN

Jacquii.



“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before
his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---
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Old 06-17-2007, 03:39 AM   #8 (permalink)
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EXCELLENT WRITE all I can say is WOW WOW
hugs kisses
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Old 06-17-2007, 08:49 PM   #9 (permalink)
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LOL - Thanx very much TOM
I actually had some devious fun writing this one
Glad you enjoyed it ! Thanx for commenting!

Jacquii.



“I do use powerful words to evoke emotion, but also to stimulate imagination. If one can 'see' the words dance before
his eyes - then he can likely feel, smell and even taste them as well. And I do thoroughly enjoy really tasty poems.
My poetry is an emotions-fest sprinkled with a little garlic salt, Mrs. Dash, fresh ginger and Tabasco sauce...
My poetry is like a piece of General Tso's chicken tossed in ghetto soul.” ---
MsJacquiiC



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Old 06-19-2007, 05:40 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Wow, was a very good read! Me thinks I should stay on your good side, lol. Very finely crafted and ummm...detailed. Excellent!
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