Miscellaneous:

[MsJacquiiC]

Smile For Me

Oh shutup! Your false kisses and
candy-drop hugs
I pluck your own eyes out
and eat them
like Chinese delicasy:
I deserve to see.

The severed veins
such horrible pain
I eat and feast my belly
on. Gutteral screams
I know. Being demeaned
slapped, japped, talking crap
I know. I feast on it.

And though the harvest let go
a fluid and festival glow,
such turmoiled seas know
fireflies and my love! Gnats
dismissed from below,
you fear me and
my boots are more than human.

I smash termites through your skull
I feast on the maggots,
they are as delicasy
to me. I bow furiously
again and again and again
and again I pick delicate
flowerstems from your decripid brain.

Yet - I not glow in your pain
luminescent and piquing interest.

I'm the devil. And you are
God.

I laugh at you. Roughly
and raucously.

Smile for me.


Copyright © 2007 Jacquii Cooke

[erikestabrook]

wow it feels good to be outdone in the twisted category,

cool poem

[PaintedDiary]

Ms Jacquii,

What a roller coaster ride into the depths of the subconscious. This is a fantabulous write!! Emotion just drippin with painful viscosity. Awesome!! Can you teach me to write like that? LOL As always, it is and has Ms Jacquii's unique signature on it!! Loved this! Gave an excellent rating!

{{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}}

[Sally Roberts]

MsJacquii:
Breathless I may say.
I was holding my breath all the way through as I read this one.

Indeed an eye opener for sure. Great imagery to say the least.
Greatly twisted and vivid.

Whew! It was unique. good job.

[MsJacquiiC]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by erikestabrook

wow it feels good to be outdone in the twisted category,

cool poem

LOL - an honor your words are to me
Glad you enjoy

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by PaintedDiary

Ms Jacquii,

What a roller coaster ride into the depths of the subconscious. This is a fantabulous write!! Emotion just drippin with painful viscosity. Awesome!! Can you teach me to write like that? LOL As always, it is and has Ms Jacquii's unique signature on it!! Loved this! Gave an excellent rating!

{{{{{~~~***KIM***~~~}}}}}

NICE - Thanx for the rating.
Yeah - this was a fantastically emotional write for me
Thanx for the commentary KIM

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Sally Roberts

MsJacquii:
Breathless I may say.
I was holding my breath all the way through as I read this one.

Indeed an eye opener for sure. Great imagery to say the least.
Greatly twisted and vivid.

Whew! It was unique. good job.

LOL - thanx very much SALLY
I'm glad you like the imagery I put forth with this one.
But GIRL - you may breath now


Thanx YAWL for the AWESOME comments.
I'm glad you enjoyed this strangely unique look into my psyche

Jacquii.

[Jeez]

Ms J....,

If you ever send
out invatations to
dinner....

it would be nice if
'm not on the list.

'd prefer to be
drank.... .

[MsJacquiiC]

LOL - OK = Thanx JEN

Jacquii.

[Bear]

EXCELLENT WRITE all I can say is WOW WOW
hugs kisses
bear

[MsJacquiiC]

LOL - Thanx very much TOM
I actually had some devious fun writing this one
Glad you enjoyed it ! Thanx for commenting!

Jacquii.

[Kit Carson]

Wow, was a very good read! Me thinks I should stay on your good side, lol. Very finely crafted and ummm...detailed. Excellent!