04-14-2008, 10:45 PM
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Re: Someone
The Following Text Is Quoted:
Originally Posted by Eric
Who would
love me
for me
Someone who would
feel my words
and know my heart
Someone I could
tell it all
to
Someone who
would believe
in me
I searched
and looked
and didn't find her
Imagine
my surprise I stopped looking
and we found each other.
Dear Eric,
This is lovely. A tender storem (story + poetry) (my made-up word, lol). It would be nice if we all could sing this song. This is a lovely piece and the development and end result is what I would hope for. Very Nice!
Kim
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