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[Jeez]

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[MsJacquiiC]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Jeez

Shifting, to find her
self dancing down her
hot hall of midnight....

....Drums, Ahhhh the feel
the sound after it's
struck....

Hey JEEZ - there are many images I grasp in this poem - so many emotions that went into creating this piece - I will speak on one though

The very 1st stanza was incredible - I love the idea of "self dancing down her hot hall of midnight" The wording and phrasing is just AWESOME - Nice lines no doubt!

Thus, the romantic vybe is instilled in this piece... As if you're really loving beeing with her, as her own vybe is akin to the feeling of playing the instrument you love most: in your case percussion?

The lines about the drums kinda through me off for a moment - but I like the idea of making music instrument a part of the sensuality... Moderator PaintedDiary actually wrote a poem about her Piano - and I get the same analogy of the instrument as lover...

At anyrate - I may be waaaaaay off - I would love to know your inspiration for writing this piece.

All-in-all I liked the vybe of this piece very much
Thanx for sharing! AND Welcome to JPiC
I look forward to read more of your poetry

Jacquii.

[Altree94]

Jeez! Nice write - but now I think I need a cold shower! The sensuality of this piece is awesome! Love your gift of imagery and the smooth flow that you have achieved in this work! All it needs is some music in the background that is heavy on the drums. Thanks for posting this!

[erikestabrook]

Hi jeez it was indeed sensual taken to the highest degree, most sensual poetry lacks teh creativity unique verse ans structure of thsi thsi was one sensual poetry bit that I liked and those are very few

[Jeez]

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[Jeez]

Hi erik,

The Following Text Is Quoted:

thsi was one sensual poetry bit that I liked and those are very few

Thanks foe the nice comments you have expressed here.

[PaintedDiary]

Ok Jeez,

I am lost for words...but here are some smilies for you to describe my reading of your poem .....

Happy to have found aother poem by you to read!

Me during the reading of this poem!

That is me after reading this...LOL!!

Jeez...this was masterful dear artist..thank you for sharing....Take Care.

Kimberly

[Jeez]

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