Miscellaneous:

[jakeminick]

[LEWD...BEWARE ]



I have a thing in my chest,
Arrested in your presence.
(Or was it my pants?)
Enrapt in your elegance.

Impossible to forget
This sense of your skin
As I crave to swim
In your delectable sin…

Miss insidious radiance,

My wish to imbue

This blatant confession...

My balls are so blue for you.


(i recited this poem to a girl after secretly learning she tried give me "blue balls" a few nights earlier. we all thought it was pretty funny. the poem, not the attempted "blue balls")

[MsJacquiiC]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by jakeminick

Impossible to forget
This sense of your skin
As I crave to swim
In your delectable sin…
Miss insidious radiance,

I just posted in another thread earlier... About a wip called "Virginity Game" -- I am not one to be insidious ((well I never!)) -- but I love this word - it just rolls of the tongue. I like the concept of "Miss insidious radiance" for some reason - it's just a perfectly ironic phrase.

Nice read dude. I enjoyed this poem very much actually, though I suppose I don't envy your blue balls = Thanks for the share just the same though

Jacquii.

[jakeminick]

hey, forgot to say thanks for the comments. so, thank you. whoever gave this 5 stars is a freak but, that is appreciated as well.

[MsJacquiiC]

GASP! Well I never
I gave it 5 stars because I love love loved it!

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I Thought You Knew
original poetry by Jacquii Cooke

And yes, if you must
know... I am
a wee bit
of a freek too.
I thought you knew.

[jakeminick]

ha ha ha...you're crazy funny.

well, i do thank you much. it's always nice to know there's another freak in the community.

[MsJacquiiC]

Don't make me bring out my freek smilies tehehhee - I subscibe to the ideology that laughter is the elixir of gods. And unlike the cheap beer I drink ==> This elixir is 100% free.