08-05-2006, 11:57 PM
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Re: STARDUST, by Paul Dwyer
Dear True, in reading this I get the sense that you are speaking for the many experiences you have gone through, yet some lines say we. In the end, I feel sadness and you being alone, not necessarily without someone, yet alone in spirit. If that makes sense. I feel that despite this, you will continue to find the truth, find the peace, find the missing piece. What was your inspiration for this piece? I am completely in awe of this! I believe this is, no, I know, this is my favorite poem of yours!!!!!!!! And the following line is brilliant....
I have drank the wine of rose pedals and stardust
Much Luv'.....Painted aka Kim (MY FAVORITE!!!!!!)
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