Miscellaneous:

[Azekiel-Horizon]

Crystallized tears, fall on a pillar of salt.
Damping the microscopic remains of a former lover.
Whom ignores the ominous cloud cover
in their dreamed-up world.
An ill-advised decision
for a division between morality and humanity results in the destruction of both.
You was loath to admit your mistakes,
believing God will not forsake you.
Dead butterflies falling from a shatter sky,
is saying otherwise.
If all we live is lies, death shall be filled with truths.
An eternity of clarity.
Increasing the popularity of suicide.
Amongst those like you
Whom were predispose to self hate
but chose to not let go of the evils in their life.
Creating an existence torn by strife.
For those who would like to know,
I'm speaking extensively to the one who was supposed to be my wife.
I Did not attend to reveal her identity or name,
for I feel as if I am the one to blame.
But something came over me in this mist of writing this piece.
It is as if the decease is speaking to me
I am increasing the volume in these Sony headphones
to block out her tone
Even though she is gone,
she left in her suicide note an explanation
that it was not me but her demons,
yet even at this moment
as I read the letter over and over,
I am still without closure
and may never be able to close this chapter of my life......

[GreaterValues]

You are so strong. Don't ever believe otherwise, you have the capacity necessary to strive through moments such as these, these periods of darkness and loneliness, you will survive. Writing is your sword and your heart is your shield, even if it feels like she took that heart with her. Remember man, this board will always be here for you, especially me.

OT
This piece of writing was as powerful as you, and it touched me. I've experienced insurmountable loss such as this myself, though I won't be so bold as to say that I know how you feel. This piece, it seems, comes from the heart. I feel like you just took me for a walk through the garden within Azekial-Horizon's soul.

"If all we live is lies, death shall be filled with truths."
Respect...

[Azekiel-Horizon]

Thank friend, all of this just happen so recently. Its difficult for me wrap my mind around. You are totally right about poetry. I just feel like lately because of this tragedy my writing has become so dark that lately I find myself unable emotionally to finish a piece. This was the first poem I wrote since it happen. Thank again, I really appreciate it

[ConcreteRose]

Hey I really love how you put this poem together... I can feel the emotions in your words. gj

[MsJacquiiC]

Wow - this piece is intense - bittersweet intensity. I hate that this is inspired by true events, but it does indeed make for interesting reading. Most poetry and writing inspired by true events does, as it is within us to want to witness the darker topics dredged up from the murk of humanity...so that I've concluded anyway...

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Azekiel-Horizon

If all we live is lies, death shall be filled with truths.
An eternity of clarity.

I found this piece filled with irony - the quoted above being amongst my favorites. I tell you what. Now that I am in this sorta melancholy mood after having read your piece...

As one who values the concept
of being wrapped up
in the truth at all times and ready
to speak it at the drop of a dime,
an eternity of clarity
seems ideal to me.

I call that little ditty "Suicide Lover Emancipated"

Thanks for the share.

Jacquii.