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Old 01-22-2008, 12:28 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Angrily she waits.
Angelic amplifying Heaven.
An amendment to God,
apiece from a cloud.
Emergence of wings
fable to the scent of flowers.
Lazy bones manifesting napper
wind.
Oblivion light.
Sabra eye.

Fable summer.
Fly- by- night animation.
Vanquish tears of pain.
Viola- beautiful face.
Angel defying grace.
Admiring hands.
A dreamer alone.
Merry weather irregular
to shape.
Despair.
Desolation.
Crying eyes.
Devotion.
Spring's gravitation.
Your left foot connects to your right foot.
Your soul connects to the heart.
Your eyes connects to the brain and you see....
The beauty of life standing still on a box of nails digging for rainbows we all want the pain because life is vain but happiness believes in itself.
 

Old 01-22-2008, 01:21 PM   #2 (permalink)
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this poem was very well written,
great metaphors, and feel to it
 


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