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[MsJacquiiC]

Tag Poem #5 - Shattered Light
Featuring Poets (in order of appearance):
erikestabrook, MsJacquiiC, bloodletting_of_the_sky, nomadicrhymer, zaac & MsJacquiiC

I dream in white, most dream in red,
I've spent my life escaping them,
my way is a silken breeze, and I adapt frequently,
I'm the hush between the trees,

And as the zephir blows,
a faded breeze of demure and effervescent might,
reluctant am I to endure such a blaze of
ever-encompassingly shattered light

my heart reaches out through windows of soul
some are hardened and bitter like coal
but I know the love that began in us all
with that same love, a shattered light could remain whole

Delirious ravings of dark spent dreams
Gleans normalcy from the betwixt and between
That shattered light grips souls’ dark shadow
A prisoner still, but wait for tomorrow

I call across dark lattices
screaming at the shadows in my eyes
I rant, against the grain against the wall
and they wonder why my spirit seeks the night

But yay that I do dream in white
whilst most dream in red, and I've spent my life escaping them.
I am the hush between the trees, My way the silken shattered light.
Can you see me? I am the ghost whisper of freedom.

[mangodroplet]

(Sorry! I'm not trying to go around bumping up older posts- i'm going around looking at poems without comments on them, but I am so glad to have read this! :]
nice collaboration.
I can see you all had different ideas....
and GREAT trying up ending MsJ-loved it!

[MsJacquiiC]

Thanx MS MANGO - I certainly appreciate the comment and hope that all the other Tag Poems we've made will get additional comments, because they are some really intricately woven pieces - it's so interesting to see how similar inspirations from such talented writers can evolve into a poem with depth and meaning.

Anyway - I'm glad you bumped this post, as the poetry posts should indeed get comments. And this collaboration especially deserved the bump

Jacquii.

[mangodroplet]

mmhmm. yes yes yes.
i agree fully :]
them collaboration poems... xD

[zaac]

woooooooooooooooowwwww!!! this is the first i've ever seen this poem finished. i had forgotten all about being in it. this was freakin awesome. i got lost so deep in that and the cool part was that no one would ever know while reading that it was written by four people. i'm hooked.

zaac

[Mysty]

*sighs* I want to do more tagged poems too..... I am hooked. Someone please tag me?

[MsJacquiiC]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by mangodroplet

mmhmm. yes yes yes.
i agree fully :]
them collaboration poems... xD

ABSOLUTLEY!

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by zaac

woooooooooooooooowwwww!!! this is the first i've ever seen this poem finished. i had forgotten all about being in it. this was freakin awesome. i got lost so deep in that and the cool part was that no one would ever know while reading that it was written by four people. i'm hooked.

zaac

LOL - A bit of poetic love flowing within the depths of that poem.
I agree!

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by Mysty

*sighs* I want to do more tagged poems too..... I am hooked. Someone please tag me?

Mmmmmmmmmmm - You're wish granted - Please proceed to Tag Poetry #7
Enjoy!

Jacquii.

[PaintedDiary]

Awesome collab everyone! Ms Jacquii that was a mighty fine ending as well. Let's keep Tag Poetry going yayyyyyyy!!!!! Loved it!

Dr. Rob