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Teacup Pup~

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Old 07-24-2007, 06:57 AM   #1 (permalink)
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~TEACUP PUP~

I'm just a sad little pup
who got myself stuck in this cup.
I was thirsty and wanted some tea
but I drank too much and fell in you see.

My owner says I'm her favorite pet
but, now she'll have to take me to the vet.
She'll be real mad when she finds out
all the money she'll spend, no more favorite without a doubt.

Maybe she'll change my name to teacup
cause all her tea I always sup.
I never got stuck like this before
so, she'll probably call me that for sure.

Teacup pup does have a nice ring.
I'm a little teacup pup they'll all sing.
Oh no what a funny joke I've become.
I guess that's why they say, stupid dog you're dumb!

I've had better days than this by far,
like when my ears flap in the wind out the car.
I miss the smells and sights and sounds.
It's not easy being a silly hound.

They say, you have to look on the bright side.
Maybe this will drown all my fleas that hide.
Boy when I get out I'm gonna chase them rabbits!
as soon as I can get back to all my doggie habits.

I wish I could play and leave more prints,
because I've been real bored ever since
my butt got stick in this yellow cup
so, that's why I'm such a sad little pup.

© Karen Davies


Nightlife calls me.
Through her I am free.
It's the only way to be,
all caught up in a mystery!
Born with full moon fever,
I can make you a believer!
For I am the moonchild,
truly born to be wild!
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Old 07-24-2007, 07:55 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Dear Karen,

again, and what a delightful read! First poem I read today and I am sitting here in PA laughing and smiling. Awesome way you gave the "pup" a voice, and he told his story through you in the form of a poem. Loved this!

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Old 07-24-2007, 08:46 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for reading and replying Kim.
Glad ya like and I am from Pa. too(hugs)
 

Old 07-25-2007, 12:37 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Karen,

This is such a cute poem. Great imagination. This would be a great children's read too because all kids, like me, love their puppies!

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I wish I could play and leave more prints,
because I've been real bored ever since
my butt got stick in this yellow cup
so, that's why I'm such a sad little pup.
Thanks for sharing!

Jerry
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Old 07-25-2007, 12:59 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I love them. The Teacup Pup is soo cute! Its like he was really alive.
 

Old 07-25-2007, 09:06 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Thank you so much Jerry.
I wrote a children's book but I wrote this
afterwards. Maybe in my next book.
I'm glad you liked!
 

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Old 07-25-2007, 09:09 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Thank you Michelle.
Watch out he's gonna jump out
of the screen at you...lol
 

Old 09-04-2007, 11:13 AM   #8 (permalink)
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ah.. this deserved a bump to the top.. i love cute little stories like these.. they true imagination and innocence.. you, i can tell. are very creative... thank you for sharing this


peace and hugs to you!
phil
~*~suck me into your happyness, your bliss....
let me find myself lost in your spirit~*~



 

Old 09-04-2007, 01:06 PM   #9 (permalink)
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That is very good!!! I like your flow!!!
 

Old 09-04-2007, 01:23 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Thank you so much Phil.
I love little stories like this too
and that's why I write them.
Glad you enjoyed
 


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