Miscellaneous:

[MsJacquiiC]

Tribulations Of Carpet

He saw the bitter spittle
In the sperm of Satan
(He knew it)
He swallowed it whole & hopefully
As the apparent culprit
Aired of dirty misdeeds (a
confession of sorts).

“Spit!”
They smiled, chortled
And laughed
The bitterness of gods; God’s
Manna reigned like giant tears
That notorious day.

“Spit!”

His loins hurt like
The blackest of horrible plagues,
Apparently
It was a known friend, along
With childhood beau.

Dukes of hazardous melee
Never knew
Anything as bitter
As His spittle; Certainly
Never His own special tear.

They awed in a horrible
And miserable reverie, thinking
Fond thoughts,
“He was a friend
Of mine…”

What if they knew?


Copyright © 2006 Jacquii Cooke

[GetShorty]

I hate to say it, but I have to admit that this went over my head. Could you post an explanation to help me out?

[MsJacquiiC]

Hey GETSHORTY - This poem has many many many meanings -

1. This poem is about the strength of Jesus' 2nd coming...
2. the power of unfathomable male - Adam doing his thing to reclaim his woman.
3. the rape of man by man (seen as homosexuality) --- "they" = complacent onlookers

Wordplay galore ---------> Just felt like playing around with the words :sign_yeahright:

Jacquii.