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Old 05-05-2008, 08:38 PM   #1 (permalink)
The "Mystic" Poet
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Who am I


I'm the one you tease,
Cause I'm different.
I'm the one you bother,
Cause I'm just there.
I'm the mat you step on.
I'm the rock you kick around.
And you think you can control me.
Like i'm the clay and you're the sculptor.
Like I'm the robot and you press my buttons.
But you can't control me.
I may be nothing as you say.
But your words don't mean jack to me.
I am somebody.
Sooner or later you'll see me on the street.
With my head up high,
While you're eating my dust.
And I'll be wondering,
Who's laughing now!
the "mystic" one

you can't spend ypur life swimming in the shallow end of the pool. pretty soon you hae to try the deep end.
 

Old 05-06-2008, 12:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I love this! And I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it.
Good job.

xo
 

Old 05-19-2008, 10:06 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Very nice, I can relate to that in some ways... When I was a kid/teen didn't have many friends was made fun of and stuff, got beat up a few times. I also have a poem called Who Am I that I wrote a long time ago but mine is about a kid trying to be cool, or thinks they are being cool.

Good work though, I enjoyed it much so
 

Old 05-21-2008, 12:42 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Very good, Fabiola! I like the ending, of course...

lol! It seems as though we have all written a "Who Am I" poem...I have one, but I prefer my "Who...are you" poem http://jpicforum.info/spoken-word-fr.../who-2687.html

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