Miscellaneous:

[KingAce]

Thank You everybody I have been having a writer's block for the last couple months and this was something I managed to squeak out and it is pretty much exactly what happened to me before I decided to just put all the thoughts together into one poem...

[Nikos Tselepides]

KingAce,


Wonderful work, and it reminds me of Allen Ginsberg's epic poem MARRIAGE.

It has a similar flow and style and diction. Look it up.

This one is about important issues and some excellent points are made.

Thanks again.

[MsJacquiiC]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

Originally Posted by PaintedDiary

Dear King ,

What I LOVE about this is the obvious. I love the title as I found it ironic actually. The concept is well known, as we go through this thing coined as being..."Writer's Block".

In the last line you say..." I wish I could just write one solid poem about something", and when reading the poem, you did

~~~~~KIMBERLY~~~:< (@

I have to agree with KIM - MR ACE you have definitely written something of the most solid! This poem not only has the panache of a learned poet, but it gives we Poets (suffering the most literary ailment... LOL) something to hope for.

ALSO this poem reminds me of me.... Everyday ME LOL - in thinking that I wish to actually grip onto one solid thought and just run wild with it... (I'm so easily distracted **SIGH**)

For this brilliant piece of artistry I say BRAVO KING!
Excellent poetry - makes for a brilliant and funny read!
Thanx for sharing

Jacquii.

[KingAce]

Thank You so much for the comments itz makin me want to look this one over again just to see what I wrote because I honestly haven't looked over this poem...well ever I just wrote it and posted it....Thank You everyone and much love...

[Sally Roberts]

Great poem King:

When it seems like we can't bring out the words we want to write about, the tragic writers block shuts the door of imagination.
And trying to force it open only breaks a few bricks at a time. You did a fabulous job breaking through.
One time I had writers block for TEN YEARS! I couldn't break through no matter how hard I tried. Then I figured out that I was trying too hard and just let nature surround me and relaxation finally won over the writers block.
Great job King. Well done!

Blessings

[KingAce]

thank you very much for the feedback on the poem, I work my hardest to put these pieces of work together and sometimes things either won't come or just aren't as good as I would like it to be in order to post it.