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Published by Lane
Posted on 04-23-2011

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when I first talked with this guy I couldn`t put this away till I finished this, the story effected me.

this is dedicated to women in War" one person i talked with, He lost his wife, and his little girl lost her mother, he told me still today he writes her letters, and his little girl still wants to write her mother.


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I`ll sit down tonight
try to write You one more time,
between the heart, and the candlelight.
when You come back to Me.

Heres this old photograph,
Your favorite song running through My head,
did I mention..how hard it is
when I have to let you go all over again.

Chorus:
I will sign...forever.
and place it here in my heart.
I will send this in care of..
everyday that goes by....
I will sign it.. I love You...
with all the X`s and O`s...
Baby.. its not so easy
writing this letter to You...


Verse

Every now and then
She and I will sit down to write
between the dresses and the ponytails,
Kate`s so much like you.

...and theres that old picture of Us
how long is forever Dad..
a little prayer, and its off to bed
baby we`re doing fine..

chorus
..and We signed it...forever..
We both crossed our hearts.
We will send this in care of..
everyday that goes by....
Then We sign it.. I love You...
with all the X`s and O`s...
Baby.. its not so easy
...writing these letters to You.



Then We sign it.. I love You...
so many X`s and O`s...
Baby.. its not so easy
...writing these letters to You.

no Baby.. its not easy
...writing these letters to You...



© Copyright 2011 Second-hand Hearts Vincent

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Old 04-27-2011, 03:43 PM
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Wow Lane! I must say 1st ((a disclaimer of sorts lol)) ==> Country is not my cup of tea. I must say that being of Tennessee though, I"m a bit of a closet Dolly Parton fan and completely love the Judds... With that having been said = I'm super impressed by your song. The lyrics are really quite beautiful; a perfect match for the somber, yet sonorous and sumptuous sound of the guitar. The production is sophisticated and really just spot on.

A real thrill to hear this piece. And you composed the music and wrote the lyrics? Impressive indeed!

Thanks for the share!

Jacquii.
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Old 04-27-2011, 08:27 PM
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thank you Ms J for taking time to have a look and comment, when I started this I was all over the place trying to get enough in it, and in the right place. the melody came easy, I just kind of hear things. words are different for me I do have a hard time. I am country...but! I don`t drink Bud" drive pick-up trucks, and have weekends shot to hell...lol..thanks again. Lane
 

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