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[erikestabrook]

He Strolled By

The sight that night came along,
unbeknownst fear with a pattern of death.
He would just stroll by casually, carelessly,
until he got what he wanted.
He was a soul-feaster, who marked out the best blood he could find
and drained it through the tongue from their skull.

And?..... Your wondering what people did about him.
They simply hoped their blood wouldn't become his.

[PaintedDiary]

Erik....love this as I love the dark and horrid as we know. Glad to be of help. It was nice to see you explore another genre and post! Great job and good luck with MicroHorror!

Kim