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Old 04-16-2007, 08:31 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Chapters 1 & 2 are in another thread. I created a crossword for chapter 1-5 too. To play it, send me a pm.

Chapter 3 – The Snake Road is actually Dragon Road, but because of the evil presence from the world, it turned grey instead of the white path with golden carvings of the scale. Some parts were still in its original color, but most of it were grey, some even black. The Dragon head had turned to snake-like, the horns were disappearing, and its teeth became sharper, even the nose was shrinking. I flew a bit here, a bit there, skipped around, joke around with the road sweeper, soon my destination arrived, the food stall... " ..., anyway there’s food every ten-thousand miles away, so food was not really a problem, only that you need to reach there fast enough or the queue is going to be very long, sometimes you could even miss your meal, anyway I always took more than I could finish, ‘cause they were free! I could save the remaining for later. Then, I could see a bright light flashing in a distant. Well, just as I thought I had reached the first gate into the world far different than my world, Two stone statue came alive and blocked me with their 1.5m hook and electric halberd, plus their war horse had a really strong tail, and they can block using their shank, and the hooves too can attack. It’s quite a tough battle as it was my first battle using magic and mystical weapons like the Magic Dust and that Zamorak Staff. Finally I had them lay on the ground struggling for breath. They led me through, anyway I had no intention to kill them. They gave me a sword, a nicely carved sword except it was broken, and they said that the Broken Sword had legends to it, well, their words appeared to me like nonsense. As soon as they finish talking, I jumped into the warp straight away.

Using the FlashStep, I could be seen appearing and disappearing, dashing through the areas, never thinking about rest. I walked to the palace up the hill, guards lying lifeless on the ground, the whole kingdom was painted red, babies crying everywhere. Then, I caught sight of a flash of light in the thick jungle miles away. Activating my Demon Eyes, I balled my fists. Just then I knew that the king of the thieves called Stealleto had stolen five of the nine Orbs of the Elements: Fire, Water, Energy, Wind, Earth, Light, Darkness, Ice & God. But which five that he stole, no one knew, legend had it when 9 of them were gathered, one can open the Forbidden Chamber which can make you 1000 times stronger and to enhance your weapons and armor to the max, but rumors said that Stealleto accidentally dropped 2 of them when he return to his den, which fall to somewhere below into Myths & Legends world, so 2 Orbs were left safeguarded with the Orb Creator (escaped during Stealleto’s arrival) now. Suddenly, foot steps were heard, a rampage of smugglers and dark warriors and ninjas appeared charging towards me. I readied my kodachis, the deadly 'Demon Blood' and the legendary 'Trinity Blood' (given by a ghost on the Snake Road queuing)……

Chapter 4 - The muggers and thugs were downed easily, but the Dark Shinobi were an exception. They easily dodged my attacks, while their shurikens easily damage me. I was low on health, but I had to retrieve the orbs. Or should I say MUST. "LIMIT BREAK! BLOOD-BURST!" I glowed blood red. The Dark Shinobi were surprised, and if not, shaken by the immense power and killer intent. "Do you want to know why my kodachis are called the 'Unbeatable Legend'?" I hissed at them. Slowly backing off, they nodded. "Because... the kodachis....are..... always get covered in blood."I charged and dash toward them. Three out of the a hundred Dark Shinobi were easily killed, and as I focused my power on my skill that I had learned so far. "Raimai Oru!" The spiral trapped 37 of the Shinobi, and when 2 tried to escaped, a bolt had shot a hole through their chests. Smirking sadistically, I readied the Unbeatable Legend again, but they quickly dodged. "Kage Shuriken no Jutsu!" said the Shinobi, throwing a shurikens that multiplied into 50. Out of the corner of my eye, I noticed a real shuriken that was hiding in the shadow of a fake. "Raimei Oru!" I shouted again, releasing the spiral. 49 shurikens fell, but the one that was hiding in a fake's shadow did not. "Damn!" I mentally swore as those remaining cut my shoulders. I had to end this now. If the same numbers of shurikens cut my shoulder, I won't be able to hold them off. "DESTRUCTIVE ART 23 + BLOOD RUSH X3!" I channeled the last of my remaining spirit energy to this skill. I'm going to end this, retrieve the orbs, and resume to drinking coke. FOR THE REST OF MY LIFE! I split my spirit from my body, harden my feet, calling the Dragon Spirit…

Chapter 5 - As soon as I gathered enough power, I dashed in a speed of a lightning bolt, slashing, cutting, clearing the Dark Shinobi like destroying a castle of cards. Stealeto, however, seems composure about it. He crushed the dark orb, which gained him dark power. I kept my Red Blood followed by unsheathing my Sword of Spirits. Stealeto ordered his 10 bodyguards to attack first. I leaped up, high in the azure blue sky, “Shadow Clone!” I shouted out. I cloned myself into 2, 4, 8, 16… 100s of shadow, but they did not last long, all of them was vanished by just using their two sided three-tip spear to slash. I dart towards them firmly I hold my kodachis, my attack seems powerful to me, but to them, just a bite of an ant. Unexpectedly, Stealeto opened up a black hole with his dark power, sucking the ‘holys’ away, the town soon became dark. On top of that, the people that had died in Stealleto’s appearance revive to undead skeletons. No matter how I run, there will always be undead skeletons, and I can’t kill them, cause they’re UNDEAD, they will keep regenerate every minute. They started fencing me up, closer, closer, when a sudden beam hit me unconscious……

Tsuzuku-(To Be Continued in japanese...)


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