Revisions:

[PaintedDiary]

Saxophone Love VIII

Opened my window,
sounds of the night float in
a misty cool zephyr
arousing my peanut butter skin.

A silhouette
my beautiful Moroccan man
divinely reclining,
fingers gently caressing his
ebony brass sax.

Mouth moistens delicate tones
blowing sweet air with tremble
stroke every note of me.

I cannot resist.

I want more.

I taste every C-clef; the tenor
aged like my collection of fine wine
fermented from sweet Pinar del Rio vines,
pulls me up slowly
improvising jazz between my thighs.

Afterward, a misty cool zephyr
tickles my dampened peanut butter skin
as we lay in each other’s arms
listening to the sounds
of the night float in.

[erikestabrook]

thsi was good freaked me out a little peanut-butter skin doesn't smell that good either plus its sticky, jk mostly I found this enchanting

[PaintedDiary]

LOL, Thank you for your time and sticky comment Erik, LOL!!!!

Painted

[erikestabrook]

I'll comment on this one again in the hopes more will comment on the revision,
I found the revision much better,

what you made what a very romantic euphorical scene the image sare great

[PaintedDiary]

Thank you so much Erik, your comments mean alot to me.

Painted

[v3sista]

The Following Text Is Quoted:

I taste every C-clef; the tenor
aged like my collection of fine wine
fermented from sweet Pinar del Rio vines,
pulls me up slowly
improvising jazz between my thighs.

ohKAY!!!!



Kim-
I've read the others, so U know I'm diggin the series thus far. I'm just embarassed that reading these make me "Horny" I need help! I'm gonna start jazzin it up at night, maybe I'll sleep better.


This reads like a hot steamy romance....U have so many levels of Artistic
Talents.

V3